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Blog feedback and learner response

 

Dyari GCSE Media blog feedback – December 2022

WWW:

Dyari, it has been a pleasure having you in my lessons this term. You are very passionate about the subject and you offer very interesting ideas. I think you will particularly enjoy the close study products when we get to them, especially the video games unit. It was lovely hearing you say that this was your favourite subject this year. I hope this continues throughout the course.

EBI:

Just lacking detail in your blog posts that we need to work on. Just ensure that you have used your exercise book and the notes on Media Macguffin to ensure you are answering in plenty of detail. If we can add that extra bit of detail you will be able to achieve maybe exceed your target grade.

LR: 

Copy and paste this feedback into a new blogpost called ‘Blog feedback and learner response’. Then, set aside some time to go back and complete missing or unfinished work. Finally, as your learner response, write what you think the most difficult topic we’ve covered so far has been and why.

The hardest topic for me would probably be Denotation and Connotation. This is because I struggled a lot with my knowledge of media, not using as much words as I should and also struggling to properly describe the scene in detail with said words. I'm not fully satisfied with my work on it and I very much think I can do much better.

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